I’m trying something different this week, in an effort to kickstart my fiction brain. I’m joining the 50 Word Thursday challenge hosted by Tales From the Mind of Kristian and Teresa at The Haunted Wordsmith. Thanks to both of you for hosting this, it was a great simple challenge to stretch my writing muscles. If you haven’t checked out their blogs, head on over for some great stories and writing challenges.
The rules
1) Completed piece must be in multiples of 50 words – maximum of 250 words. Anything is acceptable – poetry, story, anecdote.
2) There will be a photo and a random phrase that I will take from the current book I am reading – you can use either or both
3) Please pingback and tag 50 word Thursday, so I can do a summary on the Thursday morning. You can either put your piece in the comments on this post or do a post of your own.
‘Although it was a simple thing to be doing, something strange was happening.’
– Paulo Coelho – The Valkyries
Relapse
She stepped into the dark alley for a minute, leaning against the cool shade of the building. She closed her swirling eyes and exhaled heavily, then inhaled a slow, shaky breath. Her legs sagged then collapsed under her, the high-pitched screaming making her moan and stuff her fingers in her ears. Dropping her head on her chest, she squeezed her eyes shut to hold back the tears as the nausea roiled in her empty stomach. The vibrations started from deep within, travelling up her spine then out into her limbs until her teeth chattered. How would she get home?
100 words
Powerful stuff.
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Thanks Kristian, that means a lot.
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Love the Deep POV. Great piece.
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❤️❤️❤️ thanks Roland!!!
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Great writing!
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Thank you so much!!
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well done………it looks like you woke up the fiction part of your brain! 🙂
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Thanks Wendi! It’s getting there. 😊
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it’s really good! 🙂
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😘💕
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Wow. What a take on this photo. Hauntingly beautiful.
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Thank you so much!!
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